Hi Rana, great video! You definitely make your idea relatable by giving some examples of the many troubles of eating on campus. I am sure tons of students have this same problem. You also were funny which made me keep my attention on your video and continue listening to your idea. I think your idea is great and definitely feasible and possible!
Hey Rana! I really enjoyed your video! The introduction grabbed my attention because I felt that I could relate pretty easily to what your topic covers. I also can tell that you're quite passionate about your idea, and that will help you in the future as you continue to pursue this business idea and more! You did a great job with the video overall, and I am excited to see how your ideas play out in the future!
Hey Rana, great job shooting your video. I can really relate to what your saying and think that your idea is great. I'm sure that most students feel the same way as me. You clearly have a passion for your idea and that is what is going to make it successful. You video did a great job of getting the idea across.
Hi Rana, I thought this elevator pitch was really good and I felt like I could relate to your examples. You seemed very calm and in control of your speech which helps the watcher stay focused and absorb all the information you are telling us. The only critique I would give is to not have as big of pauses in between sections of your speech but I think that might have just been nerves.
Hi Rana, great video! You definitely make your idea relatable by giving some examples of the many troubles of eating on campus. I am sure tons of students have this same problem. You also were funny which made me keep my attention on your video and continue listening to your idea. I think your idea is great and definitely feasible and possible!
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your video! The introduction grabbed my attention because I felt that I could relate pretty easily to what your topic covers. I also can tell that you're quite passionate about your idea, and that will help you in the future as you continue to pursue this business idea and more! You did a great job with the video overall, and I am excited to see how your ideas play out in the future!
Hey Rana, great job shooting your video. I can really relate to what your saying and think that your idea is great. I'm sure that most students feel the same way as me. You clearly have a passion for your idea and that is what is going to make it successful. You video did a great job of getting the idea across.
ReplyDeleteHi Rana, I thought this elevator pitch was really good and I felt like I could relate to your examples. You seemed very calm and in control of your speech which helps the watcher stay focused and absorb all the information you are telling us. The only critique I would give is to not have as big of pauses in between sections of your speech but I think that might have just been nerves.
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