2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
Reviewing the feedback from my last pitch, it seems that my peers felt engaged while watching the video and could relate to the Struggle. I tried to keep the light humor and passion for my idea in this pitch as well while relating my struggles and experiences to my fellow Gators' struggles and experiences.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
One of my peers noticed a lot of pausing in my last video which I also noticed and didn't like and he suggested I try to make the next video flow a bit more smoothly. I tried to do that in this pitch.
Hey Rana!
ReplyDeleteI do feel like this pitch went better for you! You definitely express more enthusiasm and confidence in this pitch, and I'm sure the more practice you get, the better your presentation will be! I also felt that I could easily relate to the struggles that you presented, and I am curious to see how your idea and motives could change things here on campus... Overall, great job!!
Hey Rana, great job on your elevator pitch. I thought your first video was very good, and I think that this video is even better. You are definitely very charismatic when you speak, and it is shown through your enthusiasm with your product. I would not be opposed to seeing you pitch your idea over an extender period of time.
ReplyDeleteHi Rana, great job on your second elevator pitch! I thought your first one was great as well, but you definitely improved since then! You have a great presence and you are very engaging. Also, you did a great job with your hook in the beginning and getting people interested in what you were going to say. I love your idea because it's super relatable to almost all students. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Rana! I one hundred percent think this pitch was an improvement. Not saying the other one was bad, because it was not. However, this one was a lot more promising. It really pulled me in and kept my interest on the product. Great job listening to the constructive criticism.
ReplyDeleteHi Rana, thought your changes to the elevator pitch was great and that it felt very natural and personal when speaking towards college students. I felt that you kept the viewer engaged and interested in what you had to say about your opportunity. You conveyed the information about your idea smoothly and easy enough for a viewer of your elevator pitch to understand and want your heating stations made as soon as possible.
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