I did not receive any negative feedback on my last elevator pitch and I am pretty satisfied with it. My peers felt that I was engaging, passionate, and could relate to my problem. They also felt that they could benefit from my solution! At this time, I don't think I could come up with a better elevator pitch, so I will leave my last one as is.
Hey Rana,
ReplyDeleteI agree that making so many elevator pitches may be exhausting, and I felt that my elevator pitch was good enough too. Though, practice does make perfect, and if you were ever going to give this pitch to a big audience, perfecting every little thing would be important. Overall, your previous elevator pitches were solid and engaging, great job!
Hi Rana, although you may think your pitch was good (which i am sure it was), it does not hurt to practice. Your past pitches were great, but the second was better than the first. I am sure the next will be even better. Do not give up!!
ReplyDeleteHey Rana, as everyone before me states I also think you should have done another to just show that you can keep making it look perfect. Maybe instead of doing the same thing you could have came at it in a different approach. For example, you could have talked about how they could expand this idea to other campuses and franchise it.
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